Karkat Vantas

:33 < hey, i think this is a purretty good picture!!
:33 < if i may make some suggestions, i think you have a purretty good eye fur shading (especially the nose, eyes, neck, and chin - i love how you remembered the little dip underneath his lip!), but the anatomy is just a tad off. furst of all, his neck is a bit too long. If his shoulders were truly hunched like that, then his neck would actually be a lot shorter than usual. also, beclaws his head is that wide, his shoulders should be a little further appurrt. last but not least, i think you did a furry good job with his face, but his lips are a little bit thin. that may just be how you picture karkitty in your mind, but i thought i should mention it just in case, h33 h33.
:33 < purrlease dont think im trying to beat you down here. im trying to help you out a bit, beclaws i think this piece shows a lot of purromise!!! i know that lineart is furry hard; im not the best artist myself. but i bet with a bit more purractice you will be absolutely pawesome!
:33 < and i would know, beclaws i looked through your gallery, and it looks like you have b33n steadily impurroving. k33p up the good work :))